Here I sit, staring at the sky
wondering if my life is as blank
the darkness engulfing me
trying hard to break free
my vision blurred with the tear drops
fighting their way, oblivious to the outside world
embarrassment holding them tight
as I wait for the source of light
to illuminate the darkness
I am betrayed for the umpteenth time.
Still there lies a tinge of hope
like the stars that adorn the sky,
that sparkles its way throughout the night.
I will wait, wait for that day
when wishes would be fulfilled,
dreams would come true.
If fate is iron strong,
so is my faith..!!
If fate is iron strong, so is my faith.
ReplyDeleteNice work archana.
good let's wait for the W-Day :)
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Dee..
Loved the last two lines :)
ReplyDeleteGood first attempt. :)
Excellent....especially your assessment of the strength of your faith. Very positive.
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Translation of emotions into words is soooo good :) love the last two lines especially :) grt work da :)
ReplyDelete@Kajal : Thanks a lot :) do keep visiting :)
ReplyDelete@Manish: Thanks da :)
The last two lines says it all.. Awesome 1 archu :-)
ReplyDeleteThanks Raj :)
ReplyDeleteThats cool..:)
ReplyDeleteThanks you :)
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ReplyDeleteThank you for sharing. God Bless
Thank you Shamsud! :) Distinctiveness in my style? Well I am honoured:) I will visit asap :)
Deleteafter a long time a poem with positivity..
ReplyDeletegood job..
Thank you Sumukh :)
Deletenice one archu :) but konjam happy poem ezhudu :)
ReplyDeleteThanks da :) next meet panren unna :) :D
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